Cyntatorship ([info]kasugai_gummie) wrote,
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Drabble Request #5: Speaking Gestures
Requested by [info]meiface. Randomly pulled this plotbunny out of the rabid pile of insane fluff using the line as a bait. Personally, I think it's a scrawny little thing that ate a good deal of brain cells but still didn't quite gain much to boast of... besides going waaaaaay over the word limit anyway. :P Hope this entertains~

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Fuji/Ryoma
Line: Touch me and die.
Word Count: ~910 (yes. wtf. exactly)




Speaking Gestures
by kasugai gummie

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Personal contact, gestures more intimate than the pre-requisite handshake, bodily impacts...

He avoided them all, as best he could.

It wasn’t something he did consciously, or even willfully. Staring apathetically at an unwanted hand on his shoulder, brushing off some random annoyance who’d gotten too close to comfort, or even taking the initiative to removing his self from that of a trespasser invading his personal space—all where merely innate mechanisms that had no ulterior drive behind them. Ryoma was just not what you’d call a touchy-feely type person.

“Our boy genius is still resisting human contact?”

“I wouldn’t go so far as to say _that_ but...” A finger reached up to adjust a pair of obscure spectacles. “His behavior is both irrational and disruptive to my data collecting processes. Highly unreasonable and extremely inefficient,” Inui mumbled from behind his latest notebook, the visible portions of his forehead creased in a frown.

His companion tapped a slender finger to his cheek. “Would you mind doing me a favor if I corrected Echizen of his bad behaviors?” Fuji murmured thoughtfully, eyes trained on the lithe form beyond the green fence.

Inui slowly lowered the book from his face so that he could watch the predatory cast that slowly settled on the otherwise pleasant countenance. Only a favor, eh?

_______________________________________

Monday was dubbed Five Feet Awareness Day.

Fuji noted amusedly as his kouhai shifted unconsciously away from his insistent presence. For the entire day, he’d been making sure to press his advance and retain a distance of no less than five feet between him and the younger boy. As expected, Ryoma had continuously moved, wandering incessantly in response to Fuji’s tailing.

That was not surprising.

However, what WAS interesting was that the younger boy did not vocally object to his senpai’s questionable motives to following him wherever he went.

And, unfortunately for him, that was encouraging.

_______________________________________

Tuesday was dubbed Three Feet Awareness Day.

Ryoma frowned absently, picking up his pace and noticing that a rather persistent person still followed him through the crowded throng of tennis club members. He ducked behind the captain and skulked there, offering no explanation other than a mumbled greeting to Tezuka’s questioning gaze.

“Saa.”

Warning bells were clanging haphazardously in the back of his mind... But for what, he wasn’t quite sure.

The resulting feeling however, was making him edgy. And god knows what Echizen Ryoma did when he was edgy.

_______________________________________

Wednesday was dubbed Bodily Contact Day.

Blue eyes narrowed shrewdly as the distance between them closed rapidly... despite the other’s concerted effort to flee. He had told the younger boy once that he was amazing. Now was probably the most appropriate time to reiterate it had not been for his little game of Touch and Freak.

The painstaking dawning of realization was slowly worming its way into Ryoma’s psyche; the wary glares, the extra effort to avoid the infamous prodigy, the suspicion that hounded those burnished depths...

Fuji looked deep down inside for any spark of pity. He looked long and hard.

Finding none, he continued his little project.

_______________________________________

Thursday was dubbed The Official Touch and Freak Day.

Made highly aware of the body heat to his left, Ryoma shivered uncomfortably. Those damn bells hadn’t stopped since Tuesday and such extra annoyances always managed to bother him more effectively than others.

“Echizen.”

He resisted the little voice, which he’d later refer to as the Voice of Self-Preservation, and turned to face the speaker warily.

“Aa?”

“Can you pass me my towel?”

Their fingers remained in contact for a fraction of a second, giving and taking steady warmth. However, in Echizen Ryoma terms, it was a fraction too many. He wanted to tell the other to stop touching him, maybe say something along the lines of “Touch me and die” to get his point across. He did none of that though. Instead, pulling his hand away quickly, he attempted to ignore the knowing smile that graced his senpai’s face.

He failed.

Failed miserably as a matter of fact.

_______________________________________

Friday was dubbed Invade Echizen’s Personal Space Day.

And for good reason too.

The expression of “holy-shit-I’m-being-cornered” looked rather fetching on the boy, Fuji decided amicably. The vaguely traumatized visage was fairly reminiscent of the one Ryoma usually wore when things weren’t going his way. Laughing silently, Seigaku’s mind-game specialist proceeded to strip boy wonder of all pretenses of having what used to be the concept of “personal space.”

Besides, what normal teenager in his right mind, surrounded by other normal teenagers (some better looking than others) in their rights minds, would even stand a chance of remaining untouchable in environments such as the Seigaku boy’s locker room?

Not Ryoma, in any case.

_______________________________________

Saturday was dubbed Cop a Grope Day.

And for all the best reasons.

Things had gone delightfully as planned and the results rolled in smoothly.

Coincidentally, Ryoma had given up trying to avoid Fuji’s advances and even resigned himself to the other’s proposals of exploring the nuances of various gestures and the meanings behind them.

He wasn’t complaining much afterwards.

Not _too_ much anyway.

_______________________________________

Sunday was the day that Fuji called in his favors.

Inui gave his options a cursory weighing before complying with Fuji’s request and dialed a number that wasn’t suppose to be at his disposal.

It wasn’t a bad request per se—just highly unusual.

One would have never thought of Tezuka needing outside comfort.

Especially not from Hyoutei’s sparkly captain.

_______________________________________

Fin
10/17/04




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[info]jennifier_d
2004-10-17 06:08 am UTC (link)
*DIES* I *HEART* this fic from this end of my world to yours and back. (Hopefully, we're not living on the same side of the world, because otherwise it will significantly remove the impact. <.<)

Oooooh Fuji. Ryoma. Inui. Tezuka. And Atobe. *giggles madly at her computer screen*

I think I'm in love.

(On the topic of requests, I think I'll be opening up my Christmas requests early this year so that I can kick my ass into gear waaaaay before the actual day itself. :o Gimme a good one when the post is up? :D)

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 06:25 pm UTC (link)
*squints at atlas* From the Midwest USA to Singapore...... if your love travels by UPS across the Atlantic and some landmasses instead of the Pacific, then I'd say that the impact is sufficiently enough to knock me off my flying across my room. XD *HEARTS BACK*

XD Most definitely. I'll give you a "omfgwtfisthisXDXD!!!" worthy request when you open them up. *rabid luv*

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[info]jennifier_d
2004-10-17 06:48 pm UTC (link)
*giggles and snuggles tight* I should send you more of that kind of love, then. <3 (Though USP isn't cheap, honestly speaking. <.<)

It's already up! Check my journal for the latest post, and remember to login. :D (Yes, I'll be waiting for your "omfgwtfisthisXDXD!!!" request. <3)

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[info]wakkawoo
2004-10-17 06:30 am UTC (link)
Ahaha, my love for you knows no bounds :D

5 points right off the bat for this being FujiRyo *has been suffering from lack of it lately*.

10 points for your insane title days - that got better and better. My personal favourites: "The Official Touch and Freak Day" and of course, "Cope a Grope Day" <3 <3 <3

15 points for putting Fuji, Ryoma, and his Self-Preservation in the shower together (or what I assume is the shower, because of the towel) - even if it was the Seigaku locker room showers that just makes it kinkier *snickers*

And finally, 1 million points times infinity for calling Atobe Keigo sparkly. XDDD

Giving you a grand total of: omfgyourdrabblemademydayloveheartloveXDD. Results may be subject for a re-count.

I don't know how many times I've already told you, but I adore the way you write Fuji.

Fuji looked deep down inside for any spark of pity. He looked long and hard.

Finding none, he continued his little project.


*tries to grasp for words, but inevitably succumbs to being a burbling fangirl of a mess and giggles*


Wonderful premise, great flow for the story and worthy of worship because your humour isn't just mere slapstick, it's the way you work it in, the way you manipulate words that makes it clever and and- *hearts*

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 06:27 pm UTC (link)
*dingdingding* I think you're the first to have noticed that the majority of what's going on is taking place in the locker rooms (and therefore, indirectly, the showers.)

You've also noted the lack of FujiRyo fics out here? Isn't it depressing? I'm almost willing to make a similar post as my Request Drabbles meme post onto the community just so I can try to help the sudden dearth and contribute more. @____@

Oh, btw, if you'd like, you can still make a request. ^____^ I had intended to stop taking them, but Meitachi somehow slipped this one in there and I'm willing to make exceptions. And because you're special *hug*

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[info]wakkawoo
2004-10-17 07:05 pm UTC (link)
*nods* Very depressing. Though I'm not one to talk, I haven't done much in the FujiRyo department as of late, myself =_+ *no willpower to go and screencap the Duel in the Rain episode for an icon*

Saa...even though I'm itching to request (well, I'd would have to think of one first), I wouldn't feel right about it if I weren't doing some sort in return (*snort* not that I would have the nerve to post up anything I wrote in the first place) and besides, you seem to have alot to contend with right now ^^;;

Though...I -am- going to be looking forward to when you finish the Horio/Ryoma request XDD

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 09:17 pm UTC (link)
^^; Go ahead an request. No strings attached..... although, I AM willing to make it a tradeoff instead.

I suck at making icons (obviously) and really would like a personal FujiRyo one? Since you're like the queen of hilarious icons... :3 So, if you're willing.....

>_< God, the HorioRyoma one. x_x I was trying to forget about it. *slams head into wall*

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[info]wakkawoo
2004-10-17 11:00 pm UTC (link)
I think you entirely overestimate my icon-making ability ^^;;

But. I've yet to turn down a request XD So how's this, I'll try to get my arse in gear and get an icon done for you. If you like it, -then- we'll talk fic request (because everything always seems funnier in my head XDD). At least in the end, I'll have come out of FujiRyo-icon-hiatus :D

That being said, any...specifications you had in mind? Or is a "anything goes" type of thing? XD

HorioRyoma. Oh yes. I don't think its possible to forget about THAT. XDDD And it's HORIO as seme, too! *brain breaks* XDD

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 11:43 pm UTC (link)
Not at all. All those animated icons I've seen you put out are absolutely hilarious! I'm sure I'd be happy with any icon you make so request away ^_^

No particular specifications..... just FujiRyo since that's my OTP even though I dabble in other places.... and crack-ish? Considering the majority of my fics are humor. ^^;

This Horio-sexy thing is just hanging over my head like a death sentence. X_X And god, yes, it's the unibrowed one as seme..... *huddles* I don't know if I can handle the crack.

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[info]wakkawoo
2004-10-17 11:57 pm UTC (link)
Ryoma leaned in, golden eyes burnished with lust...

"Horio, have I ever told you how sexy your unibrow is?"


*is shot* XDDD

OMFG why do I want to make a Horio/Ryoma icon now?!

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-19 12:49 am UTC (link)
*headdesk* @_______@ I don't wanna write thaaaaaaat. <<;;;;;;;;;;


OMFG I'd laugh myself to death if you did! XD

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[info]sapphira_angel
2004-10-17 06:35 am UTC (link)
*giggles and cackles madly*

That was LOVE.

Touch and Freak. Voice of Self-Preservation. Holy-shit-I'm-being-cornered. And my favorite - Cope a Grope.

Just...omg. <333

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 06:34 pm UTC (link)
*slaps on advertisement sticker*

Sticker: Happy local provider of FujiRyo crack amusement

I'd say that the Touch and Freak is a personal favorite since I was rummaging through my brain for an appropriate play on Hide and Seek.

Glad you like. >D

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[info]exwaiz
2004-10-17 10:10 am UTC (link)
I want to quote my favorite lines, but I'm afraid I won't have enough space for this comment box. <3333

So let me just say: I love youuuuuuuu! XD

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 06:36 pm UTC (link)
410 words over the limit. v_v

I love you toooooooo~~ Especially since you're pumping my inner AtoRyo fangirl with so much pathetic-noise-worthy fodder. <3

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[info]meiface
2004-10-17 03:03 pm UTC (link)
Kyaaaaa...! ::adoration::

There's just too many things in this fic/drabble that make me squee to outline them properly.

"Touch and Freak Day." ::hughughugmolest:: "Cope a Grope Day."

And my favorite lines: Fuji looked deep down inside for any spark of pity. He looked long and hard.

Finding none, he continued his little project.


XDXD It's just so...Fuji! Ah, the sadism, we love it. ::clings::

I swear I'm incoherent with glee. ^__^. But happy about it anyway! I'm only too happy that this is 410 words longer than needs be, because it works so beautifully this way. I want to take all your characters (but especially Fuji and Ryo) and lock them in a closet somewhere. Mooouuuu... ::upset because she can't find the words to properly express her eternal love of this piece::

You deserve an award! A trophy! ::has mental image of a statue of Fuji and Ryoma in intriguing positions carved of bronze and set on a shiny base:: Hmmm.... XD Thank you so much; I think this has made me week! ::goes off in happy FujiRyo daze::

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-17 06:48 pm UTC (link)
*sigh of relief* I'm glad this thing meets expectations. n_n;;;

Fuji is always fun to write. It's just that lately it's becoming harder to write him since I always get paranoid that the way I portray will end up with me beating a dead horse.

XD;;; 410 words over the limit. Wow. I mean..... dude. XDXD

*hug* Love you too dear, now go write a FujiRyo fic yourself. *prods towards general fic-writing direction*

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[info]meiface
2004-10-17 06:55 pm UTC (link)
I was just staring at your interests and got to spicy seaweed and got a craving. So now I'm eating spicy seaweed! XD ::finds this very amusing for some reason::

I've been working on a FujiRyo fic. Kind of...in between the Hell that is College Apps and School.

I wouldn't worry about your portrayal of Fuji. ^^. It's dead on and perfect and just the way I love him. ::ties him to Ryoma and leaves stranded on school roof::

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[info]insaneneko
2004-10-18 08:11 am UTC (link)
Hi! Thanks for the very very funny FujiRyo fic. Many of the particulars that tickled me have been mentioned by others already. I did love the meticulous, careful way Fuji went about his little project. And how he even evaluates his own feelings about it midway. ^_^

I also went through your old entries and enjoyed your various other FujiRyo stories, as well as your characterization of Atobe. He's such a dear, even if he's an arrogant and narcissistic dear. And thanks for the C2 list on fanfiction.net. I read one of the fics on the list and liked it a lot. I am glad to have found a source for some good English FujiRyo (and various other Ryo-uke) fics.

Oh, and last but definitely not least--love the pic of Ryoma on your icon. So pretty!!

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-19 12:58 am UTC (link)
*is flattered* Thank you for your comment! I take it that English might not be your first language? ^^; I apologize if that's not the case but.... yeah. @_@;;;

Considering Ryoma is my favorite character, I suppose it's only natural that most of my fics involve him one way or another. *giggle* And yes. Atobe. LOVE to the ore-sama.

Glad that the C2 list is useful. Hopefully I can jumpstart it again when I have enough random FujiRyo drabbles to compile together.

The icon is Double Helix art. ;_; It still saddens me that they've closed down their site. *weep*

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[info]insaneneko
2004-10-20 06:34 am UTC (link)
Ah!! I remember Double Helix!! I haven't been to their site in ages and now I can't go back...*shiku*...and I don't have their art saved either...Really goes to show you that you have to save stuff you like right away.

English is actually my native language, but most of the fanfiction I read is in Japanese. I've spent the last year or two wandering Japanese webrings, search engines, and link pages for good Ryoma-uke fanfics...

Any starting point to find good fics is helpful. It's so hard to wade through other stuff. ^_^ Thanks again!

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-21 05:00 am UTC (link)
>_< My knowledge of Hiragana is limited... Kanji only to those direct translations from Chinese, and nothing on katakana. ;_; Can you please translate what Double Helix said? Not knowing makes me sad. *sniff*

Oh dear. My bad. ^^;
Are you Japanese-American then? Or at least just uber fluent in the language?

And as for Ryoma-uke related stuff, well, obviously most of my fiction deals with an uke!Ryoma. My partner in OT5 crime, [info]exwaiz, also follows that trend somewhat.... *chortle*

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[info]insaneneko
2004-10-21 05:16 am UTC (link)
Do you have webpages or text saved by them? Then I can give it a go. I have nothing saved by them...

I am Japanese-American, but there are lots of Japanese-Americans who can't speak/read much Japanese...had to study like everyone else. ><

How big is Ryoma-uke in English fandom? I can find a lot of it in Japanese, just not that much good stuff (as in any fandom, I suppose). :P And there's the everpresent other school fan thing creeping into everything...

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-22 11:26 pm UTC (link)
*goes to check* v_v No. Their site has been wiped off the face of the earth. Excuse me while I sit in a corner and cry.



*cries*





^_^ Glad I wasn't making an incorrect assumption. And agreed. Not many asians in general are literate in their native languages.... Take me for example. XD;;; I'm technically fluent in Chinese but my writing skills suxx0rs. :P

Uh..... Finding Ryoma fics in general is rather hard in the english fandom since I believe that people think, "Main character. Too boring. Let's fantasize some other character." I love the boy though, and while my stuff usually sucks, it's always better to do something yourself if nobody else is willing, hm? I'm sure you know that [info]jennifier_d is a very proficient PoT author who kicked off the FujiRyo for the English fandom. She no longer posts on FF.net, but if you dig through her memories, I'm sure you can find a wealth of uke!Ryoma fanfics.

School fan thing? *is confused*

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[info]chrysan
2004-10-19 10:21 am UTC (link)
Ryoma, it seems, can never escape from Fuji's clutches....

......YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^________^

Go Fuji~

Ryoma isn't stupid, but he just isn't experienced enough to escape from Fuji...
Oh well, his mistake, Fuji's gain.

Ochibi-chan, Mada mada dane.

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-22 11:27 pm UTC (link)
*buahahahahahaaaaa~*

Ryoma just needs to be shown the Light. *snicker*

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from Nightengale
(Anonymous)
2004-10-19 06:09 pm UTC (link)
TOUCH-AND-FREAK!!
.
::freaks out herself::
.
OMG that's great...
.
"And god knows what Echizen Ryoma did when he was edgy..."
.
TOO much CUUUTE!!
.
"The expression of “holy-shit-I’m-being-cornered” looked rather fetching on the boy, Fuji decided amicably."
.
And see...not only is this freaking hilarious, but it's also SO Ryoma (I can PICTURE the face you mean) and it's SO Fuji (little benevolently conniving cutie). It's just...wah, no words!! You're too good! ::bows, then goes back to reading::
.
Oh, a line that's been ignored by the rest of the reviewers but really really shouldn't be:
.
"Inui gave his options a cursory weighing before complying with Fuji’s request and dialed a number that wasn’t suppose to be at his disposal."
.
Oh god...::falls over laughing::
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I say again: TOO much CUUUTE!!!
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Wah...
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::glomps you:: New friend! ^_^ Whee!!
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~Thirteenth Nightengale
ffN: Nightengale13
rednightengale@hotmail.com

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Re: from Nightengale
[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-20 05:34 am UTC (link)
*giggle* Glad you liked it! XD And Atobe's phone number being on Inui's list is just another mystery of Sadaharu. Congrats for noticing it's subtle randomness. ^____^

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[info]shukuun
2004-10-28 06:31 am UTC (link)
<333!!!

Ah. I was having a stressful night and I'm glad I managed to stumble across this. ^^; (from [info]tomomichi XP) *is happy now*

XDDD And this has got to be my most favorite line:
Fuji looked deep down inside for any spark of pity. He looked long and hard.
Finding none, he continued his little project.


XDDD <333~
Hope you dont mind if I add this to my memories. XD

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-10-30 05:20 am UTC (link)
Not at all! Just very glad it was entertaining! XD

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Love you
[info]darkdreamerx05
2004-11-23 08:07 pm UTC (link)
*Giggle* So true. I could soo see Fuji doing that to poor Ryoma. You capture their personalities so perfectly. I read a lot of FujiRyo fics. But I got to say that this is one of the best fic I read so far!!! Can I friend you???

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Re: Love you
[info]kasugai_gummie
2004-11-25 03:59 pm UTC (link)
*flush* High praises. But it's good that you enjoyed this piece. ^_^

*points to friending policy on user info page* ^^ It's free for watching.

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[info]svz_insanity
2005-09-04 06:04 am UTC (link)
I am, so, so late. I came here via [info]tomomichi because I was craving for a FujiRyo fic and I love your writing style. It's so suble and the characterization is dead on.

"The expression of “holy-shit-I’m-being-cornered” looked rather fetching on the boy, Fuji decided amicably."

I'm picturing that in my head and giggling like mad. ^^

Inui calling Atobe is hysterical too. <33

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[info]kasugai_gummie
2005-09-04 12:42 pm UTC (link)
XD; I remember writing this and thinking, "WTF? Why can't I end this at 500?"

The plunnie really nipped me well that time, thanks to mei. And yes. Inui calling anybody is amusing. Considering the big snowball effect of misinformation that usually occurs with him and telecommunications. ::chortle::

Glad you liked it! ::hugs::

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